Come on time, be quick
quench this unfavorable fog
and restore tranquil bliss kindly
Come on time flow like the wind
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Great poem. And I can say that I for one have thought similar thoughts before. Especially at school. :) Great job!
Its the most important resource that one can be able to renew, it comes and goes, I love the play of words in that 3rd verse, it is so nice to read a poem about time, Write More The_African_Son
Lovely poem, your style is very tradional like your heroes.... beautifully written
Very Full filling unique understanding it has all of the needs of a beautiful poem
I give it 10 Godfrey, i like it