Monday, May 27, 2019

Come On The Ground Practically Comments

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O leader of the democracy
Come, come down, come on the ground, soil, sand, dust
Leave the stage of verbiage speech,
Leave the stage of elocution and manifestation
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Moore Noore 24 March 2021

who give you the rooms for imaginations, who give unlimited places for your poems for making your written the peaceful Eden...... great great great

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Varsha M 14 March 2021

This is really beautiful. We all should realise the importance of every worker in our life. How they toil all through the day to make it real for us. Understanding this will really change our leadership style.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

Work with the general people together! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 June 2019

Leave the stage of verbiage speech, Leave the stage of elocution and manifestation LEAVE? ? ? ? SORRY THIS IS THEIR SPECIALTY SPEAK LIES WITH CONVICTION AND CONFIDENCE THE REST WILL BE ACHIEVED.... IF AT ALL BY STAFF GOOD WORK CREDIT THEM FAILURE KICK THE STAFF IN THEIR BALLS ELSE WHO WILL OCCUPY HOSPITOLS

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 May 2019

Yes, dear poet, but it is we that put them on the pedestal, why, often in clouds, and alas they remain in clouds with cloudy mindset. As to the poets, I agree with what you say: 'Leave your lazy imaginative poetic expression of life'; all gossamer gauze, a poet can't always talk in thin air. Very true.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2019

Come to work, work together holding the hands of the laborious who decorate this universe beautifully by their wonderful inventions who give you the rooms for imaginations, who give unlimited places for your poems for making your written the peaceful Eden....... moving expression with high expectation. Beautiful poem.

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