Monday, January 30, 2017

Come On Sweetheart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can't You come to me at a place where there is none else,
I have something very special for you, not for anyone else,
Come to me when my whole takes a single name,
I forget even my name and I become someone else.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 March 2018

Sorry for the typo..should be: This is one of the most romantic and passionate poems I have ever read. In addition thereto, it is my humble opinion that this poem must be considered as Poem of the Day on a Velentine's Day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 March 2018

This is one of the most romantic and passionate poem I have ever read. A soul stirring piece that captures a selfless and eternal love. The lines in the first stanza are so moving, that it will leave the reader mesmerized by the beauty of the words. A captivating poem well written. Into my Poem List.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 January 2017

And love! I do not think love ever grows old! So pure and so untouched like silver and gold. Beautiful lines! Loved it!

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Rajnish Manga 31 January 2017

Come to me when my whole takes a single name, I forget even my name and I become someone else. Beautiful romantic poem. The feelings of the lover and the beloved have been expressed nicely.

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