Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Come On Now Comments

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hearts..become clouds
eyes..start flowing....
signs.....emerge like hurriecane
.....come on.....
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sagar patil.
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Paul Brookes 10 May 2013

Another lovely poem spoiled by the use of text speak I do like it by the way just the U and Ur's irk me. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Persian Khushi 25 September 2012

am sorry you had to go through that alone... a beautiful heartfelt poem came frm yr depressed state.

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Poetheart Morgan 29 August 2012

UAU! ! ! Really, you understand love! ! ! ! Great and beautiful write! ! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 22 August 2012

I know how you feel and this poem is beautiful and filled with longing of the Beloved's hands upon your heart and know that in those times He is with us the most a moment where we realize something and become stronger form it, if we allow it to be so, just the knowing that the Divine hand is upon us. Beautiful and I am so happy to see poems from you! :) love and light

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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