Monday, June 20, 2016

Come On Kill Me! Comments

Rating: 4.9

Come on kill me!
You have the dragger
And I have the soul
We both have our means
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 30 July 2016

Interesting write Man...10

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Sara Militello 24 June 2016

You know! You know that the soul is untouchable by evil! That evil needs permission! Would that more people knew that so they would not stand trembling in fear...Wonderfully expressed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

Why all these hatred and the wars around us? ! Yes, we both have our goals on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 20 June 2016

Thank you, Asim ji, for sharing a wonderful poem putting across a philosophical message: Come on kill me! / Strike with the might / When you see my soul / Give a last try / Before my soul departs saying goodbye

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 June 2016

Nothing can kill a free spirited soul... Loved the open challenge... Now let's take death by it's horn which has been instilling fear in the living heart. Very nice poem.10

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Nosheen Irfan 20 June 2016

Wonderful write. Body is vulnerable but soul is invincible. Death can only strike the body. Nothing can destroy the soul. A very thoughtful n philosophical write.10

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

Yes, the body can be killed but the spirit lives on

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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