Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Come On Dear Clouds Comments

Rating: 4.9

It’s too hot, could you come as a rainy spout!
The heat inside now shrieks for outing,
The music of steps I can feel, I breathe-in you,
And what I inhale is shivering my body,
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Cigeng Zhang 01 April 2015

A beautiful poem.A poet always wonders what lies beyond the clouds.

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Khalid Saifullah 29 March 2015

An amazing poem................................10

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Hazel Durham 26 March 2015

A stunning write full of passion as you wait for the beloved rain to release the tension of the humidity that drains your heart and soul!

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Valsa George 26 March 2015

Yes, it is too hot and humid! We all look for the rain! It is lurching some where close, but stays eluding like a shy lover! Let it thunder down with passion! I agree with Mark.... great metaphor!

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Mark Heathcote 25 March 2015

I love metaphor it deserves more than one read so I read it 3 times lovely.

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 March 2015

Sweet, very sweet poem.................10

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