It’s too hot, could you come as a rainy spout!
The heat inside now shrieks for outing,
The music of steps I can feel, I breathe-in you,
And what I inhale is shivering my body,
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A stunning write full of passion as you wait for the beloved rain to release the tension of the humidity that drains your heart and soul!
Yes, it is too hot and humid! We all look for the rain! It is lurching some where close, but stays eluding like a shy lover! Let it thunder down with passion! I agree with Mark.... great metaphor!
I love metaphor it deserves more than one read so I read it 3 times lovely.
A beautiful poem.A poet always wonders what lies beyond the clouds.