Monday, November 9, 2009

'Come On Baby No More Cry' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the lord my soul to keep
My soul unworthy take my heart
That while I sleep my life depart
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Terri Turrell
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Otteri Selvakumar 27 December 2009

this is not only poem heart waves... come on babay no more cry ===wonder full.

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John Kim 20 November 2009

Oh! This is good poem. Yuo are indeed lord your life. I guess that you are beautiful and sexy. I read it five times and felt you have penned an eminence charged strok of exellence sandwiched between repeat performance of first and last stanzas in which with the variable options. Your opinion are impressive and nice so I think that really you'll woman sexy and nice.

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Lorenzo Costigliolo 19 November 2009

I read it twice and felt you have penned an emotionally charged stroke of brilliance sandwiched between repeat performance of first and last stanzas in which with the variable options you have looked into the very heart of a troubled soul which leaves its interpretation so variably presentable to readers from the sane to emotionally troubled and back again. Great spontaneous write. L

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Patrick A. Martin 19 November 2009

Now heres something that triggers the emotions. Sad thing is many couples live like this for years, They call it devotion? -10

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Akram Saqib 19 November 2009

you really touched the heart with your lovely poem

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Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

Wow wow wow. This is something else again. Wow, you are the reigning queen of orginality. When you get going nobody can touch you. This is going into favorites, pronto (along with most everything else of yours I have read thus far; you are one dynamite writer) . You're almost dangerous. (watch out with that gun, lol)

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Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

This reminds me of a song... Well lets hope this baby is good.. and he/she listens to Mama... heheha good write

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