Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the lord my soul to keep
My soul unworthy take my heart
That while I sleep my life depart
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Oh! This is good poem. Yuo are indeed lord your life. I guess that you are beautiful and sexy. I read it five times and felt you have penned an eminence charged strok of exellence sandwiched between repeat performance of first and last stanzas in which with the variable options. Your opinion are impressive and nice so I think that really you'll woman sexy and nice.
I read it twice and felt you have penned an emotionally charged stroke of brilliance sandwiched between repeat performance of first and last stanzas in which with the variable options you have looked into the very heart of a troubled soul which leaves its interpretation so variably presentable to readers from the sane to emotionally troubled and back again. Great spontaneous write. L
Now heres something that triggers the emotions. Sad thing is many couples live like this for years, They call it devotion? -10
Wow wow wow. This is something else again. Wow, you are the reigning queen of orginality. When you get going nobody can touch you. This is going into favorites, pronto (along with most everything else of yours I have read thus far; you are one dynamite writer) . You're almost dangerous. (watch out with that gun, lol)
This reminds me of a song... Well lets hope this baby is good.. and he/she listens to Mama... heheha good write
this is not only poem heart waves... come on babay no more cry ===wonder full.