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We spend our days with quite rage Looking for reasons to be human But find ourselves inside a mask Through a city of lonely ruins....I admire it.

A powerful poem so beautifully crafted and conveyed.

I have never read such writhing sorrow so well expressed in a poem before--5 star rating

A brilliant poem showing how disunited we are.

Unfortunately, ununited we seem to stand and shall ultimately fall. Awesome write!

superb encouraging the last stanza~ brilliant poem shared

City of lonely ruins cries but the man should try to escape from ignorance and sadness. Tender natural music with godly theme helps in releasing stress out. You poem is really very sensitive poem and this provokes thought. We should be careful.

Life faces many critical situations but no one should get deeps stress but he should keep patience. Committing suicide is so sad. Due to ignorance a man does it. But he should listen to God's natural music and get relief from his high stress. Life is precious.

Life faces many critical situations but no one should get deeps stress but he should keep patience. Committing suicide is so sad. Due to ignorance a man does it. But he should listen to God's natural music and get relief from his high stress. Life is precious.

Very well expressed and so thought provoking.

A one of a kind poem

Sometimes if we are blinded by darkness, we tend to remain in this state.6

This is really inspirational and challenging. I like this perspective of yours..For most of us Life's a painful test That we were never meant to pass So let us fail with dignity Then we can make the good times last..into my favourite.

yu have come I am coming

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