Monday, June 4, 2012

Come Now Comments

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Come now into darkness, come now into death
Come now into shadow, give to me your breath
Come now I've been waiting, since your day of birth
Come now simple mortal, you're no longer bound to earth
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Tim Vallie
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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2012

The call is clarion.Flow is awesome.Very nice indeed!

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Ramesh Rai 06 June 2012

Good attempt. keep writing.

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Neetha Sasidharan 04 June 2012

wow...really grt poem......grt idea....grt rhymes....grt speed......evrythng in this is so grt...kp writing..

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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