Monday, April 27, 2015

Come Now, Child Comments

Rating: 4.5

On the wings like those of an eagle she craved to soar,
With the undeterred courage of a wild boar,
But you fell oh my darling child in a quest to find prosperity,
Now you are enveloped by the repulsive odour of poverty
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Terrance Mawanga
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 07 August 2015

Yes, a real life situation.so touching

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Brian Tafadzwa Penny 05 May 2015

A great poem i like it.

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Hazel Durham 04 May 2015

Original and a story written in a beautiful style with great imagery, thanks for sharing!

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Kelly Kurt 30 April 2015

A very well written and soul touching poem, Terrance. You have a gift with words and evoke vivid images and emotions. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Munashe Rupazo 28 April 2015

Reminds me of a woman that bore disappointment and pain But did not abandon or abort because the season gave no rain. The tempting sheep-coated hyena drags her into negligence, But the mother knows better and still holds her hands through all solace. BRAVO!

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