Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Saturday, November 17, 2012

Come My Love My Utopia Comments

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This world seems like dystopia
Come my love my utopia
Drive away my insomnia
Drive away my inertia
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Matt Mooney 18 November 2012

A very effective declaration of love written in a nice form for the subject.

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Hazel Durham 18 November 2012

Lovely poem, with great rhyme, flow and passion!

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Xelam Kan™ 17 November 2012

Wowww this z absolutly fabolus grtly penned Allusions r fantastic best picture of romance thumb up dear asif.....

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Erica Borges 17 November 2012

Very lovely. And I still encourage you to be courageous and let this woman know how you feel. Life is just a dream. Live it well.

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Caroline Bulleck 17 November 2012

I like the rhyming scheme, wording and flow of the poem. It is beautifully written and full of meaning. I like this poem.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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