Monday, August 20, 2012

Come My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweetest heart of all design
Shall you ever yet be mine
Come, my love, and dance with me
In my arms you're meant to be
...
Read full text

Valerie Dohren
COMMENTS
Mary Forrester 11 January 2013

Beautiful poem Valerie

0 0 Reply
Adeline Foster 11 December 2012

Yes, so well composed. Love your work. Read mine - To Be Completely Known and All Forgiven - Adeline

0 0 Reply
Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal 04 September 2012

we expect so much from our love. well wriiten and well connected.

0 0 Reply
Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 September 2012

Wonderful enchanting invitation so well composed, it could be a love song too.

0 0 Reply
John Brown 03 September 2012

My kinda poem Valerie. I love a love poem.

1 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 01 September 2012

Love the Rose too, favorite flower, they grow beautifully in your climate. N'est pas

0 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 01 September 2012

Lovely music to your verse, It's been really quite a while, That I've seen such a nice style

0 0 Reply
Destry Drew Miller 24 August 2012

Until very recently I wouldn't have understood this, now I know and its beautiful.

0 0 Reply
Godfrey Morris 23 August 2012

How romantic. Lovely poem.

0 0 Reply
Eindaray Kyaw 23 August 2012

You have a sense to manage your poem in a really lovely harmony and in a flow of beautiful meanings!

0 0 Reply
Joseph Anderson 22 August 2012

A downright beauty that would be great as a song. Wow! Val you still have it. Amazing flow

0 0 Reply
Robert Green 21 August 2012

Love for two, This is beautiful val :)

0 0 Reply
Danny Draper 21 August 2012

An invitation, and of love an affirmation, love, always love. Does and always will find a way.

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 21 August 2012

One more jewel in the crown! ! ! As ever, perfect rhyming! !

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilson 20 August 2012

A sweet romantic poem, a lovely write, much enjoyed Val.

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 20 August 2012

A beautiful poem as always. To feel so much love is an amazing feeling.

0 0 Reply
Meena Mustafa 20 August 2012

Such a romantic poem Val.... Loved it! 10++++

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren

Valerie Dohren

Southport
Close
Error Success