Friday, June 19, 2009

Come-Live With Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

Pain... is that what i feel when you are away?
-the prick, the ache and the thorn in my heart?
Come-Soothe me.
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anju addanki
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 June 2010

Joy in enjoying pleasure in pain…a very nice concept…and equally well penned.. Enjoyed Ma’am 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kee Thampi 06 January 2010

we feel a freedom in words to fly Pleasure! is what I feel with you by me, light headedness, my singing heart and the starry nights. Come-Fly with me.

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Siddartha Montik 30 October 2009

liked it very much.., nice way to express the love for a Dear! 10++

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Siddharth Singh 26 October 2009

The man will have no choice but to come to you and live with you, once he reads the poem. Wonderfully crafted.

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Emma Adamyan 20 October 2009

sorry didnt find the poem u`ve asked abt, but this one i liked so much. so cosy

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Surya . 25 June 2009

opening your heart to your man. very nice voted 10 surya

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anurag duggal 25 June 2009

learn to control you emotions or i am afraid they will get the better of you best wishes your well wisher ravana was a grat scholar remebereda zillion good words but all mayavis are destroyed...thats destiny... thats destiny..... best of luck

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Karla Bardanza 23 June 2009

Lovely poem, full of good vibe!

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