Sunday, February 3, 2019

Come Lie With Me Comments

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I lay awake for you
to come lie with me in my bed
I need you by my side
come hold me, make love to me
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Aqua Flower
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2019

Come lie with me! ! Make love to me. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Carl Roussell 04 February 2019

It is a great feeling when physical and emotional meet. A 10

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Aqua Flower 05 February 2019

It is...isn't it? Your comments are always appreciated!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

nice poem for him if only instead of lie ' u spelt it as lay u have shooood himaway I may sadly say may try again and say come play

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Aqua Flower 05 February 2019

Haha Yes...I may have shooooood him away but he always will want to come back to play! thank you for your comment!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 February 2019

Lovely poem, dear Aqua Flower......10++++

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Aqua Flower 05 February 2019

Thank you for reading and sending me a lovely comment! I appreciately it.

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