Come Lets Die Comments
The purity of an ancient rainfall,
The sanctity of the breeze once flew,
The nature at birth in the greeness
of the trees now as dark coal,
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nice extended cognitive metaphor: ''The care for the fellow human in our heart melting gently with clocks of yesteryears Joining this league unnoticed by us'' wonderful abstract poem...............10+++
SIMPLE YET EXPLICIT.ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT...I ONLY LIKED 10 POETS ON THIS POEMHUNTERS, BUT YOU MADE #11..CONGRATULATIONS, AS YOU CAN SEE, I VOTED..I WAS THE 1ST PERSON TO DO SO
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7/23/2025 10:02:30 PM # 1.0.0
Very nicely written. I love the way you take nature and breath life into your poem and then turn it around a speak of Come, Let's Die. Very good approach. Thanks for the invite. Lynn