Monday, August 3, 2009

Come Lets Die Comments

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The purity of an ancient rainfall,
The sanctity of the breeze once flew,
The nature at birth in the greeness
of the trees now as dark coal,
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Putholi Arumugham T
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Lynn Glover 14 August 2009

Very nicely written. I love the way you take nature and breath life into your poem and then turn it around a speak of Come, Let's Die. Very good approach. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

nice extended cognitive metaphor: ''The care for the fellow human in our heart melting gently with clocks of yesteryears Joining this league unnoticed by us'' wonderful abstract poem...............10+++

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Kristina B; Williams 04 August 2009

SIMPLE YET EXPLICIT.ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT...I ONLY LIKED 10 POETS ON THIS POEMHUNTERS, BUT YOU MADE #11..CONGRATULATIONS, AS YOU CAN SEE, I VOTED..I WAS THE 1ST PERSON TO DO SO

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