Come Knock My Door! Comments

Rishi, this is really very good. It flows so naturally, the images are delightful and the construction is spot on. I had to read on for a second to understand a funky cam was a camera but looking back it fits in perfectly. Better than using the word camera in fact. Well written.

A pug pup with nose twitching Soft fur gently glowing Marble eyes kindly calling. To have you for keeps, Where ever you are, Come Knock my Door. Oh i want that too! ! The poem is really good and tempting... An aquarium... a dog... and mangoes....! ! ! Nice write... Aditi