Wednesday, November 9, 2005

Come Join The Circle Comments

Rating: 5.0

As day was beginning, I mused at your being
As dawn's early mist rolled the darkness away.....
Within you, young lambs and black rooks and a robin,
Within me a voice seemed to call me to play.
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Lucy Burrow
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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 November 2005

Come join the circle, we'll set your soul free. Really it is an soul searching poem, as dance and music touch and melt every heart, in that one can forget the world of troubles for a moment.

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Lucy Burrow 09 November 2005

Thanks Ernestine and Sally, this poem was a result of visiting Avebury Stone Circle on my birthday this year, just after sun up, there were early May morning mists and the whole place was magical, it had a very lasting effect on me and has to be one of the Special places for me in this world. I have set this one to a tune I wrote, for the harp, which I strangely enough named 'Avebury! ' regards, Lucy

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Ernestine Northover 09 November 2005

This is fantastic Lucy, I've loved every stanza, and it has such a super rhythm I was singing at the end. Smashing! ! ! Sincerely Ernestine.

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Lucy Burrow

Lucy Burrow

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