come into my world
and you shall see
what my life is like
what it is to be like me
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Great poem. It encourages both empathy and self reflection for the reader to see and understand that he or she probably does not have it that bad compared to the sorrows of others.
it is sad what you have been through, but to take the feeling, and be able to put it into words, that may help some one else to know, that there is others out there who have went through the same thing. you may not know it, but you are reaching people with your poems, you are helping some one out there, your poems do touch me. so write on, you do have a talent, just keep doing it.