Thursday, May 29, 2008

Come Into My Room Comments

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Come into my room
It’s not the best room in the street
It’s the best room in the neighbourhood
Don’t be afraid of the four walls that surround it
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Nkululeko Mdudu
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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 June 2008

heart yet calls its clone to its room never when befuddles by the reeks room burns brilliant by the light of the rune gleams yet inspires the love as attuned.............wonderful poem by the imagery yet all ingenious, exuberance cascades on thr rungs of love universal, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 May 2008

Nkululeko, you have painted a frank picture with engaging humour and wry irony. The poem says a lot more than appears on the surface, indeed, invites the reader to view what is... Rgds, Ivan

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