Come In I'Ll Give You Shelter From The Rain Comments

Did this really happen? Very very eerie and I could feel the rain, hut and that ugly old woman...........wow..........chilling experience reading this poem itself.......what to say when it really happens.

a fine poem that keeps you spell bound till the last word, you have mastered the craft of narrating a short story in a nice poetic manner,10++

an intresting story and creepy too.you may not have enjoyed the encounter but i enjoyed reading it.thanks sandra maam.

A haunting encounter indeed. Praise for your rich imagination. Love, SandraX

Intriguing to say the least Sandra... enjoyed it... regards Alf

Very fine tale, Sandra, with excellent ambiance and many fine, intriguing lines, particularly: A black cat ambled across the floor Towards his mistress almost listlessly... :)

poet's poetic hallucination? yes...for, it's a narrative poem written in the first person... good narration Sandra...escaped, you drank it albeit! 10

Well, with such a brilliant poetic line for a title, Sandra, I was looking forward to reading an excellent poem and I was not disappointed. You told this fine tale vividly and quite well and your startling conclusion to it is both logical and the best one that there could be. It was a very enjoyable poem to read, and also to recognize the talent that caused this fascinating write. Carl.

a ghost, a dream, a fantasy, an encounter with an evil spirit, was there a woman involved and did he lose more than his consiousness? ... loved the suspense, the mystery, the intrigue...just wonderful, Sandra!

you have excellent command on writing narrative poems. now this one is open to many interpretations, could be a dream, nightmare, hallucination, glimpse of the maker. wonder what Freud would have to say... the point is it holds the interest till the end like a suspense novel. Mamta

Wonderful tale, a nightmare perhaps? Made me think though does anybody offer to let you in out of the rain today. Bob 10++

Poem: 20195451 - # Come in I'll give you shelter from the rain Member: Meggie Gultiano Comment: I agree to what David commented below, Sandra.A very entertaining piece.You really is a good story teller.You have me held my breath reading this from end to end.

A tale to tell around a winter hearth Sandra - - I can just imagine the ghostly lady in her cottage of dreams..... well written - the telling holds the reader's attention...10 fom Fay

very interesting tale sandra, you bind the reader till the end...i like it, dear....

Your tales are always so mesmerizing. You know just how much to reveal and how much to hold back. You must descend from royal generations of storytellers! (smile)

Sandra, what a wonderful haunting tale you have presented us here, was it a dream or hallucination, it is up to the reader to decide. My guess is it was a dream. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David