Saturday, September 1, 2018

Come Home Won't You? Comments

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Come home won't you? You have been away so long.
We miss your easy ways, your silver lining smile.
These days are good but ours were better
You spin such stories with joy and laughter
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Edmund Strolis
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Nosheen Irfan 12 September 2018

A beautiful beautiful plea, a calling to rejoin. When a good friend walks away, things are not the same. You feel their absence sorely. I'm sure such lovely words would bring your friend or loved one back.

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Sarah Persson 02 September 2018

Helping a friend to carry a burden is the ultimate in compassion and unselfishness. If only your friend could read your poem and come home. The beauty of your words is remarkable

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Edmund Strolis 02 September 2018

If I could wish anything for anyone it would be that they are blessed with true friends. I do not mean people that are there only in sunny days because they are acquaintances of convenience. A friend should be one to criticize or praise, all with your best interest at heart.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2018

How a friend is longing for a friend is incisively and startlingly inscribed here. I quote..... These days are good but ours were better You spin such stories with joy and laughter Please return won't you? Return to us once more Marvelous poem.

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Edmund Strolis 02 September 2018

Good friends are a blessing, true friends that always wish for our emotional, personal and spiritual success. Never jealous, always supportive. The burden no matter how great is eased when carried on many shoulders.

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