Sunday, April 3, 2005

Come Home With Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

I see you there standing alone
So lonely, so broken
Hollow inside you search
Search for a guide
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jodi right
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Nasra Al Adawi 20 April 2005

I also felt, its talking about Autism

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Nasra Al Adawi 20 April 2005

This is really great poem...it seems to me it talks about someone who is ill and the apeal of friend to bring them back to life....Im touched

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long gone 08 April 2005

this is almost flawless.

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Amy Taylor 05 April 2005

i thought it was very good indeed! !

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Michael Shepherd 03 April 2005

A fine expression of the space, the place, between the love we have to give and the love that can be received. Just what tears apart so many poems on this site! Congratulations.

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