Come Fly With Me Comments

I love it! I am a choirboy and just for fun, write racy silliness on rare occasion! Probably come from repression more than anything! Great write, stay bored if that is your inspiration!

Absolutely beautiful poem, I intend reading all of yours.

A dancing dream with class swing every where enjoyed it being a dancer with your imagination all I can say is get dancing nad have some fun...regards

What a Rollercoaster of a poem Lora you really let your imagination go! Nothing wrong with that in fact you should do it more often. Like the till we can't tell the ceiling from the floor line, I've been in a few clubs like that!

a v nice poem Lora, words just kept flowing in your poem and the readers equally got carried.........

A lovely poem that flows and rhymes well and with great imagery.

the poem flows like a spring....spontaneous! upon my word, great.

Brilliant poem :) I kinda love how you create that anti-climax at the end! It's pure awesomeness ;) _Wu

Readers really fly with you till they come to the last two stanzas. Your imagination ran so well. Please, don't judge me too harshly, Boredom has sentenced me to death! ...and My life is predictable and boring, And this is just my way of having fun. Leave us in a state of sadness.