Thursday, July 11, 2013

Come Fly With Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit here surrounded by four walls
Filled with graffiti and stains,
In the center is a door with a window
Looking out toward the River Seine
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Lora Colon
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Chuy Amante 05 May 2014

I love it! I am a choirboy and just for fun, write racy silliness on rare occasion! Probably come from repression more than anything! Great write, stay bored if that is your inspiration!

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Mary Forrester 24 August 2013

Absolutely beautiful poem, I intend reading all of yours.

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

A dancing dream with class swing every where enjoyed it being a dancer with your imagination all I can say is get dancing nad have some fun...regards

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Kevin Halls 16 July 2013

What a Rollercoaster of a poem Lora you really let your imagination go! Nothing wrong with that in fact you should do it more often. Like the till we can't tell the ceiling from the floor line, I've been in a few clubs like that!

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Kavya . 16 July 2013

a v nice poem Lora, words just kept flowing in your poem and the readers equally got carried.........

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David Wood 15 July 2013

A lovely poem that flows and rhymes well and with great imagery.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 July 2013

the poem flows like a spring....spontaneous! upon my word, great.

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..... W@king Up..... 12 July 2013

Brilliant poem :) I kinda love how you create that anti-climax at the end! It's pure awesomeness ;) _Wu

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2013

Readers really fly with you till they come to the last two stanzas. Your imagination ran so well. Please, don't judge me too harshly, Boredom has sentenced me to death! ...and My life is predictable and boring, And this is just my way of having fun. Leave us in a state of sadness.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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