Sunday, November 1, 2009

Come Dine With Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come to my house after dawn,
Wait on the grassy lawn,
Till I open the door,
When you leave you'll want more.
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Amy Jayne
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Mrs. Blue 02 November 2009

It's so light and happy. I love it.

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Susan Jarvis 01 November 2009

This wonderful piece has it all - rhyme, rhythm and humour. A well crafted, highly amusing poem, Amy - well done!

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Amy Jayne

Amy Jayne

Bradley Stoke, Bristol
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