Come Dear Come - (Dream In My Dreams) Comments

You spun a wonderful dream Asif. Salsa dancing, happiness, trees, love filled eyes, hugs to eternity. Wow! The title made a sweeping statement and your poem certainly came up to the standard of the title. 10 Karin Anderson

Beautiful poem.........I can feel the depths and weight of emotions......

Come dear come you are the one come to that paradise ahhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! asif you dropp rubies pearls and diamonds all the way beautiful ---- you express so nicely another A+++++++ love anjali

Eyes are everything! Eyes! Yes. Then a smile. More eyes! ! Great.

i hope that your dreams will be fulfilled soon, nice thinking n dream. keep it up maryam

romancing into a dream...good ending, Aijaz...thanks for sharing...10

I love your ending it is superb! ! ! this is greatly written! ! ! excellent job. Becca

Come dear come you are the one for whom my eyes become barren and turned into sand Sooo painfully beautiful... Asif bhai, no body needs to come to you, you have to find your love inside your inner self... Very well thought and wonderfully written poem... And leaves the reader craving for more... Well done...!

May your dream is fulfilled Asif, , , , , , , what a beautiful landscape! Nice writes.

Nice descriptive piece...thank you