Friday, September 29, 2006

Come Closer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Are you an illusion of my delusion?
I seem to feel you from another time!
I seem to have had you in my mind.
And here you appear as clear to me.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Francesca Johnson 29 September 2006

One of your recent bests, Lawrence. Real or a delusion? It leaves the reader to wonder which one, too..... Love, Fran xx

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Brian Dorn 29 September 2006

'Are you an illusion of my delusion? ' Awesome line, Lawrence, and a great poem! Brian

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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

ANOTHER great poem frm the master! ! Keep going man your on a roll,10 for tiyler

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Diane Violet 29 September 2006

Good question, I hope you get the answer you want. All the best, Diane

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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