Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Come Closer Comments

Rating: 5.0

come closer and I'll pull the trigger
dare you to ask me why my pupils are bigger
you filled my head with all this stress
come closer and you'll have to clean up my mess
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joshua reid
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 29 August 2008

I am impress by this write.I enjoy read it.

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Tanya Stanford 29 August 2008

wow. Very dramatic. I felt emotion for every word written and the 'come closer' part very impactful. Good job.

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joshua reid

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