Come Close. Comments

This is poets poetry M lady

A beautiful write from a beautiful heart, that is what shines through...10+

And a beautiful heart it is.

A lovely personal story told in your poem.

Hi Ann! A delightful read, you have shown your heart at it finest in this poem, from the very core - Where all th' memories are.... Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

Come close, I shall unlock my heart Of all sweet sour memories' cart.

A really beautiful poem Ann, very touching. Best wishes, Andrew x

whoa, i could really feel the rhythm...beautiful poem, you are quite the poet! And the heart theme with the constant beat...everything flowed perfectly! !

yet the story when unveiled by wonders teemed of love, anger, sorrow and mirth altogether and that is the life with which we still move by the years..............well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

The structure of a poem doesn't get any better than this. It had a nice connective flow to it that made it a most satisfying read. Well done. GW62

A heart that has lived, loved, suffered...very well-written. Thanks Ann.

Woven like lace, Inspiring write.

Awesome poem Ann! ! love it, capturing & poignant, a pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

Raw, touching but finely penned honesty. t x