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Women are TROUBLE, plain and simple! ! ! ! Men are MORE trouble ......or so my love told me. :)) bri

Ah, I look at your versification a little bit more closer. Without a spec, but more specifically. Must write a few humble words of content and wonder, when i am, inshaAllah, back from meeting a friend, who demands my presence to discuss the release of his latest movie in November. wait for details, rgds.

what a touchy poem Gulsher u have composed, very appealing..Wish thy mercy have on me....begging for love, longing for mercy: '(

a nice write. the first stanza is lovely. enjoyed the read

It is a somber, serene cry of a heart waning for love...sweet symphony alliteration... weird, wane and wailing is beautiful

You need mercy - but - with or without love? - You search be patient - and found something - wandering from your hands. -

This is great! Nice rhyming and rhythm here: D