Come Clean To Me Poem by Julia Luber

Come Clean To Me

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I am going to have to clean up my act. Somehow pristine,
immaculate. These reflective blames just don't sound clean-
like the adolescent cover ups of a moody teen.I should focus on only
a beaming star- bright and shiny in the night. Decorative and
tamed to twinkle and light. And light the night and soak up sun.
As carrying all that weight around just isn't fun. And what does
the sun weigh? I fear to say or to obey that distant rhyme- that it
is pure lightness of a different time; a memory that I command
"Come clean tome."

Thursday, August 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cleaning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
how I have to clear myself of certain messy burdens
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 08 August 2019

Brilliiant. You don't pull any punches in this life Julia. It's one day at a time. Hang in there, like the rest of us.10+

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

Thank you for reading and complimenting with a great response.

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Bryony Sheldon 08 August 2019

Wow. A lovely, tremendous piece. I can tell this was penned from your heart.10+

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