Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Come Back With A Smile! Comments

Rating: 4.8

This poem is dedicated to the fond memory of my father who left this world almost twenty-two years ago. It feels like yesterday whenever I think of him.


Come Back With a Smile!
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 September 2014

Father's love is some hing people seldom talk about. Still, it is something realistic and worth talking about. You did it, Gita. Nice write! Let your poem be dedicated to all fathers. Thanks for sharing.

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Shona Sengupta 19 March 2013

Very touching....... it so often happens that we don't value what we have and regret it later when its to late. Written very nicely Ma'am.

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Prasanna Kumari 03 September 2012

very touching but it is soothing to know that still the memory is very powerful giving all the inspiration in life..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 July 2010

You made me fall in love with numbers; you helped me hone my linguistic skills; ......... .reminiscence ruffles in vale of tears wounds love yet haunts deep as when dipped down in his sea heart crunches unveiling own blood by portrayal, quite poignant as we remember departed father, really a greatest tribute to your father,10+++

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Come back with a smile! I imagine you saying even after twenty-two years whenever your thoughts come to my mind.......it is passionate and true love love. it has hidden true feelings too.. nicely composed one....10

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Subbaraman N V 25 June 2010

A noble father! A grateful daughter! ! A genuine tribute! ! ! May your father continue to bless from his heavenly aboard!

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What fond memories of your father, you have. An encouraging, uplifting poem. Lovely to read! ; D

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Robert Fernandes 22 June 2010

Very touching tribute to your father from you Geeta Ashok specially as the world celebrated Father's Day, two days ago. Your father will always live in your memories for his numerous contributions in shaping your life. Nice composition.

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