Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Come Back To Me Comments

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I see it in your eyes,
As you bow to pray.
The drugs had worn you down,
But what counts is you’re here today.
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That was really good. I love how it sounded to read, it flowed really well. Also, so much emotion there, I could really feel it.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 February 2011

A true concern through a nice verse. I hope he listens to those words, the God said through you.

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Ari Ryan

Ari Ryan

Lowell MA
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