Oh Lord! Since the day you left
This Brajabhumi has lost
Its sheen and colour, its joy and laughter
In every corner
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an earnest prayer like this will for sure compel lord Krishna to come back........
Beautiful poem retelling of a folk lore so alive in hearts of millions of Krishna devotees.
Lord Krishna lives in the hearts of millions- a beautiful devotional poem
Awesome drop! ! Brajabhoomi became like a desert without Krishna and people want Him so much to be back. Very nice.
Verily, a heart touching poem that refines the mind, heart and soul..................................10
Well depicted the mythological story about Lord Krishna. A beautiful devotional poem that touches the heart amd mind. Thanks for sharing such a captivating poem. .....10
A lovely devotional piece of poetry dedicated to Lord Krishna, his various deeds and the thrall in which he held Gopies, his friends and even the nature. The poem reminds me of Mira Bai, Jaidev and a host of other poets of Bhakti Era of Indian literature. Hats off to you. I quote a few lines: In every corner / Emptiness prevails /....happy voices of your friends have become silent / Each tree, each vine and each rock, miss their Lord / They miss your magic touch
Thanks a lot for your nice reviews of my poem and your encouraging words.
Superb devotional song full of Bhakti Ras. It has adroitly portrayed the theme and narrated the scenes as they should have been then. Thanks for sharing. Ten.
I am very much thankful for your valuable comments.I am all the more happy that your comments followed immediately after publishing of this poem.
Brilliantly written poem about lord Krishna and the sadness prevailed after his departure.He is still present in hearts of crores.