Thursday, October 8, 2015

Come Back, Krisna Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh Lord! Since the day you left
This Brajabhumi has lost
Its sheen and colour, its joy and laughter
In every corner
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Bharati Nayak
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Nabakishore Dash. 12 November 2021

Brilliantly written poem about lord Krishna and the sadness prevailed after his departure.He is still present in hearts of crores.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 16 April 2018

Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. 10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2017

A superb sublime creation..Jai Sri Krishna

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Bakuli Bhakali 29 October 2015

an earnest prayer like this will for sure compel lord Krishna to come back........

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Savita Tyagi 10 October 2015

Beautiful poem retelling of a folk lore so alive in hearts of millions of Krishna devotees.

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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2015

It is so nice to read your valuable comments.Thank you very much.

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 October 2015

Lord Krishna lives in the hearts of millions- a beautiful devotional poem

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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2015

Thanks a lot for your kind remarks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 October 2015

Awesome drop! ! Brajabhoomi became like a desert without Krishna and people want Him so much to be back. Very nice.

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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2015

Thanks for your kind reviews.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 October 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem that refines the mind, heart and soul..................................10

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Bharati Nayak 09 October 2015

It is a real pleasure to get such nice remarks.Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Well depicted the mythological story about Lord Krishna. A beautiful devotional poem that touches the heart amd mind. Thanks for sharing such a captivating poem. .....10

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Bharati Nayak 09 October 2015

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing my poems.

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Rajnish Manga 08 October 2015

A lovely devotional piece of poetry dedicated to Lord Krishna, his various deeds and the thrall in which he held Gopies, his friends and even the nature. The poem reminds me of Mira Bai, Jaidev and a host of other poets of Bhakti Era of Indian literature. Hats off to you. I quote a few lines: In every corner / Emptiness prevails /....happy voices of your friends have become silent / Each tree, each vine and each rock, miss their Lord / They miss your magic touch

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2015

Thanks a lot for your nice reviews of my poem and your encouraging words.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 October 2015

Superb devotional song full of Bhakti Ras. It has adroitly portrayed the theme and narrated the scenes as they should have been then. Thanks for sharing. Ten.

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2015

I am very much thankful for your valuable comments.I am all the more happy that your comments followed immediately after publishing of this poem.

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