Friday, November 11, 2005

Come Back Kid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dance the dance steps
From when I was small
I just remembered
I didn’t dance at all
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Some great concepts being thrown about in this poem! Most excellent!

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***** ********* 11 November 2005

I love the title! so full of hope. I really enjoyed the way you dealt with the badness of childhood, understand it and then let it go, is my experience. Writing is such a wonderful way to break free. 10 from an escapee Tai, never looking back

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