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heart touching write felt me to cry for a cry of her father. i have portraits of your figure fine but these photos are unkind. they don't let your tender hands reach my head. be blessed by the heavenly soul

Extremely emotional! ! ! Each of your tributes to your parents is exceptional in terms of composition. why don't you hear my mute cries...? It’s hard to control tears in your eyes after reading this! ! ! don't you know that in my heart your memory lies. my anxious soul and silent sighs call you Father come back Home... see your daughter come back Home... stay blessed! ! ! ! ! ! | |

Heavy emotion is screaming inside living chest..that echoes in mind to tell past memory to live again_Soul

your tender hands reach my head That tender touch a photo can't provide. This poem is a great tribute to a loving father.

I am sure he is in complete agreement with you. If only he could return, but in spirit he can. lovely call to him

this is what, a longing of a daughter have purest heart to love her interlinked people with the sense of purity from the core of her heart, indeed a heart rending poem, longings of a emotive heart can heard in it quite transparently....your poem compelled me to cry...that is what, a quality of a great poet/poetess to do with the art of his/her poetry...geat

Knowing the background, how this poem creates ripples of longings and memories in my heart! ! I can imagine how deep that relationship has been! It is believed that a girl's first love is her father! ! He must have responded to his dear daughter's call from the other world! !

It's a cry from the heart that plays on every daughter's heartstrings whose fathers are away...steeped in emotions and love

I think it is better for this poem to imagine that she's not calling her father...but the one that calling is the voice inside her father's heart which maybe her voice too.

very compelling call.. from the heart

Also add it to my fav poem list coz my dad's in India n i can relate to it.

Marvelous poem shahzia! Such a heartwarming longing one too. Read my poemmails too.

I believe your father hears you everytime you talk to him, even if they are not with us physically they are with us in heart. I also wrote of my father. If you get a moment read my poem titled Papa.

This is what is called 'capturing the purest feelings in simplest words'. Love you Shazia for this poem.

A lamentation: -( A heart-rending plea, with powerful, yet sorrowful overtones. Life is not the same for a devoted daughter, who tenderly yearns for her father in every way, but time cannot be erased. He has no power to return, and she has no power to bring him back. You’ve done a superb job with this very emotive piece. : -)

Come back for earth cedes its Grip every minute on my infirm feet Come back there still is hunger to learn Left in my limbs that sends pangs Come back I’ve forgotten to cry Your shoulder could melt glaciers Of rejection Come back or teach me to follow

How beautifully u have sculpted the urge to be with the father

Deep expression in this one. Well done. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

i feel very sad while reading the poem..as if i am relating with poem........where father has gone? Is he away from your home or he has gone to his eternal and permanent home....? very pathetic story but sometimes we have to accept it.........

VERY PATHETIC, INDEED! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !