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What a wonderful song this would be Rini.++10

Very beautiful and romantic poem filled with deep emotion.

Memories not faded! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Very Beautiful Poem of Wait for the Love that vanished in mixture of Fog. Lovely expressions with simple words. Thanks for sharing Poet!

Seems pang of separation in marital love. Thanks

Come back home soon Am lost in your thought. Heart touching poem

Sound like a song, and the longing of those past such a melodic melancholic chorus :)

Hi Rini, Wow! ! ! ! What a poem! Exquisitely narrated: When we walked in rain Under one umbrella You poured a little love Scarcely to fill the cup I still remember how I stole a kiss from my love under her umbrella, some forty-odd years back. In the heavy rain, I just joined her under her umbrella to save me from the rain; but once I was with her, the new idea occurred to me. I still remember how she shuddered on the touch of my lips on hers.. Your words: : You poured a little love/ Scarcely to fill the cup- reminded me of my delightful experience. Thank you for that. The starting lines Where are you honey Where you disappeared Memories not faded Of foggy and chilly day set the mood of the poem: The disappearance of the lover, his memories still lingering. And the rain setting the environment of light sensuousness.. And the line And vanished in the fog is in perfect sinc with the earlier line: Of foggy and chilly day- the repetition here enhances the beauty of the poetry. And the wait: Looking at the door Waiting to hear a knock and the desire: To lean upon your arms And rest peacefully To look in your eyes And float into dreams The longing: To hear you sing softly In husky voice With smile on your lips And make me sleep The restlessness: on the fringe of deewanagee/break-down(?) Waiting for you my love Counting every breaths A day is like a year Can't wait too long Come back home soon Am lost in your thought. Fantastic.. The line: Come back home soon- Here you have used the words- come back home- which stand out from the mood of the rest of the poem. You have mentioned in the first a few lines that the experience of love was very short. Still, the exhortation is -come back HOME! It is as if the narrator considers herself as HOME of her lover! ! , though he may not have this feeling.Shows the intensity of her love.. Loved reading this beauty. A lovely 100++ Added to mypoems to come back for a re.....