Come back O Commander! ,
From your monument,
Where you slept for the last.
It is time O Commander! ,
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In the best this piece is a revolution within a pessimist transforming himself into an optimist in waiting or otherwise It is a poem which reminds me of Mathew Arnold`s famous statement on P.B Shelley and it is up to you to trace it.
Tiger Tiger burning bright! .....Che is awe inspiring....and very happy to see a poem about him...clear thought so no hindrance to lucidity...simple but a sincere approach...nicely crafted...
quite inspiring write by praise of commander yet blazing his glory and fame, ++, keep on writing, thanks for sharing
a litt graduates upbringing is definitely evident in this...Great style....Keep up the good work...Hope to read more of your poems in PH
Unlimited praise and love for commander! How great he would have been? We need great men to serve this world. Great theme.Thanks for share Marks10
this poem has fire in it! amazing work..seems u r an experinced writer.looking forward 4 the nxt. thnx 4 all ur comments on my poems.
your writing has rhythm, resonance...right lexicon and right emotion. this may not be your first poem! thnq for the invite. keep your heart open n poetry will sure flow from it!
Che, the hero of billions! The true revelation! The true human being! The very truth! Great tribute to the Last Human On Earth!