Thursday, June 23, 2011

Come Back Commander Comments

Rating: 4.7

Come back O Commander! ,
From your monument,
Where you slept for the last.
It is time O Commander! ,
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Philip Jose
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Che, the hero of billions! The true revelation! The true human being! The very truth! Great tribute to the Last Human On Earth!

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In the best this piece is a revolution within a pessimist transforming himself into an optimist in waiting or otherwise It is a poem which reminds me of Mathew Arnold`s famous statement on P.B Shelley and it is up to you to trace it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 December 2011

Very strong piece. I was a fan of Che Guevara.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 11 July 2011

repetition of words sounds your language. good keep it up

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Cyril Mathew 26 June 2011

Tiger Tiger burning bright! .....Che is awe inspiring....and very happy to see a poem about him...clear thought so no hindrance to lucidity...simple but a sincere approach...nicely crafted...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 June 2011

quite inspiring write by praise of commander yet blazing his glory and fame, ++, keep on writing, thanks for sharing

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Abhay Vignesh L 26 June 2011

a litt graduates upbringing is definitely evident in this...Great style....Keep up the good work...Hope to read more of your poems in PH

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Rekha Mandagere 25 June 2011

Unlimited praise and love for commander! How great he would have been? We need great men to serve this world. Great theme.Thanks for share Marks10

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Maria Rose Dominic 25 June 2011

this poem has fire in it! amazing work..seems u r an experinced writer.looking forward 4 the nxt. thnx 4 all ur comments on my poems.

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Indira Babbellapati 24 June 2011

your writing has rhythm, resonance...right lexicon and right emotion. this may not be your first poem! thnq for the invite. keep your heart open n poetry will sure flow from it!

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Wish I Had An Angel 24 June 2011

This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work. ^_^

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Arfa Iris 24 June 2011

fab poem.. n very good thought......... keep it up brother........

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Philip Jose

Philip Jose

Kottayam, Kerala, India
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