In a crowded world where the occupants in it are dull and bland
Eagle sight over the world but still I see you like a diamond in the sand
I'd like to have our relationship completely restart
Give me Cupid's bow so that I can take another stab at your heart
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i love this poem it mostly say something that are happen in my life right now. it a sweet poem and i love it thanks for writing it.
this poem is really sweet great job displaying caring emotions^^
beautifully penned..you let you heart and feelings out in this truly wonderful piece..
So far that is one of your best poems You see that when you don't use rhime you poem become more effective
I give you two thumbs up for this poem. Seriously, this poem is so beautifully written and expressed. It made so much sense. I almost cried towards the end because it is so beautiful. Great chioce of words! ! !
This touches my heart, you have such feelings for her she dose not know. hope she will see you love her and are true.
oh WOW! this poem is filled with such passion and emotion. Great Job.... keep writing :)
Corey this is a most excellent letter poem, any girl would want a letter like this.It touch my heart as I read it.MOST BEAUTIFUL. A 10
I love happy endings, and I see you do too. If I were/are this person to whom you were/are speaking I surely would give it another go...Seems like your ready to settle into a love routine, who knows...Lightning might strike twice and really put on an electrifying (and edifying) show! Good luck in this quest. You're the best part of it so far.
Thats a good poem....you dont find that many men willing to be that deep with their feelings...good job