Sunday, May 24, 2009

Come Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears fallen on my pillow
Pain drilling thru my head
Its all the thoughts of u never coming back that has me crying in my bed
Tell me why u left me what did I do to to make u leave
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Lechelle Jones (01.24.91,D.C)
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

Don't know what to say... Should i praise your words? but how can i praise your pain..?

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

Don't know what to say... Should i praise your words? but how can i praise your pain..?

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Aww it seems he means alot to you...hope everything works out for the best_good job! ! ! DLG

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Slade Oriley 04 June 2009

This is well written. You have alot of emotion involved and I can tell this is heart felt. You do a great job. :) 10

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Toni Bellanger 03 June 2009

beautifully written and flowed well

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Antonio Liao 03 June 2009

a realistic poetic melo of our time....the beauty inside lies the emotion that lives in every readers feeling....a master piece of what meant to be true...of you...a 10

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