Come Back! ! ! Comments

SWEET! It so pleads, you can see the imagery of the come alive. The structures, both poetic and plot is well literated. CUDOS! (sorry, sugar high)

I am not sure if you are familiar with Ray Charles. He was a singer and wrote songs. A song of his called 'You dont know me', you might find very interesting. Try to download it a give it a listen.. It has a similar message I'm sure you would like.. Great writing..Maxwell

i love this, its awsum! ! ! x x

Thisn is a really good poem Emma, keep it up: -)

Hey Em, This poem is good and I love it. Bye from Kelly

T0 beg for a love one to come back would be sort of an illusion.... love must be a two way connection who have feel the same intensity! If one leaves for a reason then let it be, if someone leaves there has to be a better one coming who is worth your love! High marks.

hope who ever that person is will comeback to you...nice poem, nice to read and well written... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis