Thursday, August 7, 2008

Come Back Comments

Rating: 4.6

I wanna write but what can I do when all I can write is about you
I am tired of writing without seeing you
I am tired of myself, of every thing in this life
Life is beautiful when you are in it
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Little Sunshine
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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 June 2009

come back come back oh come back na! she is waiting..... the 'You' must come back! :) 10+

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Ete Amour 13 June 2009

Aww, this is really sweet. Great job!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

'Come back to the one who you are its shelter Come back for me Coz I love you and I can not stand another minute living without you' Lovely love poem, love it.

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Eyan Desir 21 March 2009

Awww, keep writtin sure your love will come back hehehe

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Yasser Koor 03 November 2008

nice poem dear Hataw; there is a big emotion behind the lines. well done Yasser

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Chrispin Kamara-Johnson 07 October 2008

This is a genuine love poem. well done

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Serenity Prayer 02 October 2008

very passionate. i can feel your pain through your words. very deep and sad. great job.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Come back is a poem on love expressed lucidly. Nice.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Seems very clear to me, dear friend, that you express yourself quite well. A warm and endearing poem, here. Full of yearning and longing for that someone, a feeling that we all have no doubt felt. Be Well, Nate

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Brian Hinckley 11 August 2008

Very well done. I can feel the emotion.

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Blessing Nanier 07 August 2008

it is very very romantic and emotional

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