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Great love poem Loved it

What a grand tribute to a beloved mother! Great effort!

come in any form..... indeed u never hope for any replacement for mother....a beautiful tribute to the only one who understands every breath of us..

A beautiful tribute to mother.

Mother o mother of mine, who will forget thee

Nice twist with a late mother rather than lost lover! Deep emotions in there! Nicely done

Reading the poem half way I thought this could very well be for a mother. As it turned out it was. A beautiful heartwarming tribute to a mother. Thanks for sharing.

SADDEST POEM EVER I HAVE READ IN MY LIFE

I love your wording, flow and imagery. It is so beautifully sad and well written.

Am in love with your lines, very touching; an expert work.........bravo!

Dear Deva, this is a very beautiful piece of creation from your pen, a lovely tribute to your mother but the same poem which also can refer to anyone we deeply love. Keep on posting. Very delightful read.

I have read all three of the poems of today and this is the only one which truly grasped my imagination and emotions....a truly wonderful and honest tribute to your mother...the pain is so apparent in this write....tyvm karen

ahhhhhhhhhha! ! ! ! such touching words i felt to cry pearls you dropppppppppp-- A+ and 10+ for this lovely one anjali

Dear Deva De Silva, The very fact that your mind and heart are full with the memories of your beloved mother is evidenced in your beautiful and intense poem. May she continue to inspire you into a noble and memorable life. Would you please clarify what you mean by 'Speak red, ' which I couldn't understand? Love.

You have given your mother a superb poem gift. Your tribute is extraordinary. It is deserving of all those comments and more... Love, Sandra

I wish she can hear all these of yours and giveth you what thou wanteth.........10++++

a mother's child you are, a profound dedication, strong structure in every line, well verse...

a poem tender soft structure, moving...a lot of us feel alike and yearn for such comforting love in difficult times of life...good work...10

Sigh, this so touching and your words so beautifully displayed. Very powerful and poignant piece.

Great poem... You drew me in and surprised me with a sweet ending.