Sunday, January 11, 2009

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all the oceans became waves of tears in my eyes.
all the deserts became vapours of frustration in my heart.
where ever i stay why am i not with you?
it is you that my soul repeatedly asks for.
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Indira Babbellapati 15 January 2009

the intensity pours forth at one go...

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januel l 12 January 2009

love is painful, although this is a beatiful poem..

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Linda Ori 12 January 2009

Ah, lost love is such a painful emotion. Like a huge hole that is oozing our very lifeblood. Of course we want it back, but need to learn that maybe it was not meant to be. Perhaps there is someone better waiting for us to open that other door. When God doesn't give us what we want, it's because He has other plans for us. Heartbreaking read, and one that we can all identify with at some point in our lives. Well written. Linda

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