Saturday, May 5, 2018

Come As A Bride And Take Me To Your Fairy Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

First time you came in a frightening ugly black dress
To snatch me from a silken dress of one with caress
The poisons you left behind were neutralized by love.
Silk of a mother is enough to counter all mess.
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Valsa George 10 May 2018

A woman...................be a mother, beloved, wife, sister or friend..... all are dear to you! This I believe is a lovely encomium to all women! Fine write!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2018

.......you are the kindest to me.... now so many poets tell me...let them not envy... SIR ye and me- - I am a poet with and to all friendly...thanks ur really kind and all on PH are friends equal friends of mine...as I know none personally...all poets of PH are equal to and for me thanks ye who read and comment so lavishly

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 May 2018

AND...The most positive person is a poet who acknowledges the worth of a fellow poet How I yearn for you and JAWAD JANAB to walk the space across my hand and scribe such lovely words coming from you It ensures the sea is blue and love to all poets like you is due.Both aj and you are within 500 a distinction I would cherish hopefully ere I from mom earth PERISH

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 May 2018

Beautiful poem...Yesterday some one's wife smiled at me...as I observed her feeding her newly born baby She... when she walked away smiled at me Oh POP like she thought of me.. I was wild all about her beautifully..How wonderful a wife she could be Th e lucky guy he.AND...The most positive person is a poet who...read on please...

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Rini Shibu 06 May 2018

Touch of a wife is enough to counter deadly miseries..wonderful poem

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Robert Murray Smith 05 May 2018

The bride of night has insight. She looks into what condition is your condition in.+++10

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