Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Come And Take Me..... Comments

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Oh dear....
During a deep sleep,
Come and hold my hands,
Take me with you,
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SWAPNA FERNANDEZ
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Unnikrishnan E S 22 June 2016

Swapna, I pray, may your love for poetry see you through the vagaries of life, its harsh realities. Life is not a bed of roses. But it sure, is not full of thorns either. Let hope kindle your courage to face the difficulties squarely and come out successfully.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 January 2016

A poem represents the human feeling about death. wonderful creation of event but human life is precious enough to continue till last breath that comes in its own natural way which our wishes and activities makes us prepared.A beautiful poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2016

So nice poem with honest feelings...10 death shall provide peaceful breathe no treachery and no deception tat is we want in human rlation

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Swapna Fernandez 09 January 2016

Thanks for reading....

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2015

Never give up on your dreams. There is always a way in life. Get hope and move on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Swapna Fernandez 09 January 2016

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