Come And Play In The Garden Comments

But the fruit we will not pick, For that would be a naughty trick, And very likely make us sick. moral lessons. tony

There is a sweetness to this that refreshes a jaded taste. May not, however, much resemble today's siblings out at play mores the pity. I like her end-rhyming ability... smooth as silk and very natural..

Such a heartwarming poem by Jane Taylor👍👍👍

Thing's were kind of simple back then.. James McLain

A simple and lovely poem!

A sweet rhyming poem. Simple and beautiful.

Note that though this has a strong rhyme scheme it twists neither logic nor syntax—an example for us. -GK

Nice rhythm and rhyme.

Excellently penned, nicely crafted..........