Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Come And Eat. My Bread Is Ready Comments

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Come and eat. My bread is ready,
I have baked it with my time.
It is brown and bromate free,
You don't have to pay a dime.
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David Olusanya
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David Wood 15 September 2015

Baking bread is a really good analogy. If this is your 4th poem it is a good one. Keep it up.

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Ilorin, kwara state, Nigeria
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