Sunday, March 9, 2014

Come Comments

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Come,
a train
or come the main
ride the rails
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Smoky Hoss
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Dee Corpolongo 27 March 2014

Oh Smoky, I really liked this great poem here. The ending line is said like it is, and with wise words, it is what it is. Enjoy every moment of this ride, with all kidding aside. as I never lied. Thanks for this once again, my friend.

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Valerie Dohren 25 March 2014

Excellent Smoky, we certainly won't be coming this way again, so we have to make the most of it.

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Joseph Anderson 12 March 2014

No matter how you go life is a one way trip. A very interesting write. A summation of life in a rip roaring nutshell

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 March 2014

because one thing's really quite certain, we'll never come this way, ever again. wonderful thought..

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Dave Walker 10 March 2014

Sing the blues, it's going to be a long trip, a great poem.

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Lawerence Mize 10 March 2014

How true. Great poem Smoky.

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