Sunday, November 8, 2009

Come... Comments

Rating: 3.1

can your fingers
hear the throb behind
each pulsating capillary
as it echoes through
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indira babbellapati
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

Exuding love … ‘…desire laden skin sprouts // zillion goose-pimples…’ Loves horripilate our psychic derma… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK PS I clicked for vote several times...but...no result...may be deferred action...

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K. V. Venkataramana 21 November 2009

'desire laden skin sprouts zillion goose-pimples...' Beautiful imagery! Keep on writing, Indira.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 15 November 2009

a poetic call for LOVE! may the LOVE fill your winter days as well as all the days.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 November 2009

Heart-full love for the beloved with passion and longing.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 November 2009

aged woman can love better than young woman.10 shan

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rago rago 10 November 2009

wonderful write...........................

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Sandra Martyres 09 November 2009

Wow Indira, I agree with Karin and everyone else this is indeed a very seductive piece...perfect 10! !

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Whoa! ! A seductive, sensuous and deliberately delicious poem Indira. Sorry, I have to go and 'cool off'! ! ! ! 10 love Karin

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Patrick A. Martin 09 November 2009

Indira when i startedto read this one I was 62 wnow I've finished I'm 26.(smile)

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Ranjit Ravindran 08 November 2009

Wow..a chilling romance! Reproduced the sensory impulses with precision. Enjoyed it.

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Ramin Chaman 08 November 2009

can your skin absorb the perfume this skin exudes filling the winter's morning air? ... Hello indira few lines ''but a very nice...and lovely..is fine Ramin .

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 08 November 2009

ma'am this one is interesting

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