Wednesday, September 23, 2009

*come* Comments

Rating: 3.1

Come to the light where it is warm,
out of the dark and into the light.
Run from the bad and come to the good.
There is someone waiting for you,
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Eyan Desir 05 October 2009

I liked the ending it wasn't what I expected good write for a 10

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Jerry Hughes 24 September 2009

You're coming too much Sarah, but well written. Cheers, Jerry

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Chang Yi Huang 23 September 2009

WOAH! ! This is really a lovely poem that exactly makes feel the exciting atmosphere.Actually, everyone is trying to find the best way to live their lives. Even though we usually faced the difficulties of today and tomorrow, someone will always be somewhere, waiting for us. thank you for ur nice poem ^^

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